Slime Failure

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Slime Failure

While the Year 8 are at camp the

Year 7 decided to have some activities

like Slime making.

Me and my group was super excited.

So we went into room 5 and sat down on the table.

It was a big mess! There were heaps of shaving cream

on the floor and glue everywhere.

At that time, I already knew this was going to be a failure.  

Ms Salu, our teacher gave us some instructions,

for how to make slime.

While were reading the instructions

I hear heaps of kids yelling because there excited.

I had to shout while talking to my group.

As so the craziness was over we went of

to get the ingredients,

I got the spoon and bowl and Kelly got the glue.

We were running all over the place to get the ingredients.

Me and Kelly keep on dumping several of stuff in the bowl.

I grab the borax and put in the bowl.

Kelly was shouting with excitement and said “OHHH!”

Its working.

But then it turns out it's just gone thicker.

Suddenly, I stop and think, how come this isn’t working?

In the videos I watch, it was functioning.

So Kelly decided to have a little test of the slime.

Sophia let's try to add some glue and borax together and

see if it worked. Said Kelly. Ok I said.

So we tried that and it still didn’t work we were shocked

and confused.

I think it's because of the glue Kelly said, Maybe I said,  

so we tried several of the stuff to make the slime work.

Sadly it didn't work.

Kelly said I gave up, this will not work. I said why?

Let’s try something else. No said Kelly. So,

I just walked around to see if any of the other kids slime

is working,

actually it’s not only our slime is not working it's all of them.
There just dumb,  

and think that the slime that

they made was fluffy slime but it's just playdoh.

10 Minutes and packing up time, yelled Ms Salu.

So I hurried and just steal some playdoh in the floor

and in the table to save it to myself.

Little while later we sat down in the floor and went off

to our next activity.    

“That's Our Slime failure”