Orphaned

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Orphaned...

One day in the Orphanage a girl named Bella always wanted to have a family since she was five.

She was always jealous of  the little kids that had been adopted.

So one night she prayed to god about her being adopted.

At the next day,  
the clouds was musky and car is all moist as the clouds pass by

but a car past the Orphanage and she saw  

two couples walking by the door so she ran to the stairs took a peek of the couple.

A Nun ask Bella to come down and say hello. This might be the time for Bella will be be adopted.

So, they made a choice to bring Bella to the couples home.

She was so excited she said goodbye to all  the kids in the orphanage and pack up for tomorrow.

Little while later it was night time. They all went to bed except Bella.

She was praying to God for adopting her and finally getting a family.  

At the 3rd day the couple was waiting outside to get Bella.

So, the Nun woke Bella up so she can get ready.

Few minutes later Bella went inside the car and went to her new home.

When Bella is home the couple said “Welcome” Oh wait I'll be right back, said the couple.

But when they got back they grab Bella’s hand and tie her up.

She didn't know the two couple is a criminal down in Los Angeles.

So they move to California to kidnap a girl in a orphanage.

This Writing is about a little girl being kidnap in a orphanage.